You fell in love with a deadly thorn
And before you knew it your heart was torn
We all saw just how it would end
But you pushed on in hope it'd mend
We told you over and over it wasn't right
But you ignored us every night
He picked you up and dropped you hard
And now you're left all broken and scarred
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when you see someone fall and break over something (or someone) not worth it
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i like the seperate couplet stanzas, they work really well for this poem
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just imaginary....
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You are violating my territorial bubble!
And before you knew it your heart was torn"
reminds me of that song "every rose has its thorn" by poison. ok that was random.
sounds a lot like something i would write. even though i havent written in a while.
good stuff.
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"If you can't get someone out of your head, maybe they're supposed to be there."
"She walks away and he faithfully follows."
And before you knew it your heart was torn"
reminds me of that song "every rose has its thorn" by poison. ok that was random.
sounds a lot like something i would write. even though i havent written in a while.
good stuff.
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"If you can't get someone out of your head, maybe they're supposed to be there."
"She walks away and he faithfully follows."
sigh. it's a bit too late to turn back time..
awesome work, rhythms and the like.
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You've stolen my heart, but I have three more back home in the freezer.
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