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Rest your head, next to mine by ~readmyspine:iconreadmyspine:



Lay me down
In the place where I will rest
Lay me with what is yours
And what you gave to me

Rest my head
In a place filled with you
Rest me down gently
So that I might still breathe

Send me to sleep
In a sanctuary of us
Send my body away
To a place where I am ready

Let me go in peace
But know my heart is yours
Let me drift away
To somewhere I am free
©2004-2008 ~readmyspine
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i wrote about 6 pages of feelings last night, this is part of one.
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~sporkk:iconsporkk: Aug 23, 2004, 4:50:12 AM
It's nice to see that you still write. As elegant as always.

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~ruzkin:iconruzkin: Aug 23, 2004, 5:05:52 AM
I like this, it flows witha simple honesty that very few authors manage to capture.

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~i-am-what-i-am:iconi-am-what-i-am: Aug 23, 2004, 5:47:28 AM
i have to agree with karl here...
elegance is the word that would best describe this for me...
yet again, another piece that is really beautifully wording...

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you still write so beautifully!
~i-am-what-i-am:iconi-am-what-i-am: Aug 23, 2004, 5:47:54 AM
i have to agree with karl here...
elegance is the word that would best describe this for me...
yet again, another piece that has really beautiful wording...

:+favlove:

you still write so beautifully!
~lost-mister-me:iconlost-mister-me: Aug 23, 2004, 5:35:11 PM
in such a free way it still seems nicely structured. hmm that may seem to contradict but oh well.

"Rest my head
In a place filled with you
Rest me down gently
So that I might still breathe"

that part seems weirdly familiar. it seems ive heard that last part somewhere. lol but i dunno

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~goodmorning:icongoodmorning: Aug 25, 2004, 11:42:57 PM
beautfily written, such a peaceful flowing poem... well done :)

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